Wednesday, November 20, 2013

blog writing assignment #1

 My home town is Takarazuka city . It is very good place to live, but if we can reform some points of our city,we will do our best.
 Takarazuka city is well-known as the birth-place of Takarazuka Revue. So many  fans of them hope to visit our city.However, Hankyu Takarazuka Station is not clean and a little worn out. For example, ln the case of rainy day, the roof leaks lightly, there is some rubbish on the platform, and the toilet carry the nasty scent.
 I think that It is expectantly people who come Takarazuka and watch Takarazuka Revue, so we should not make them disappointed. It is not good that people who have a expectation  are disappointed because of above elements. So, Hankyu Railway should repair the roof of the station, pick up rubbish, and reform the toilet. But citizen including me should not impose all things on the company. We have to do something instead of it. There are two easy things which we are able to do. First,  We must throw away rubbish in the trash box. Second we should use toilet cleanly. If we and Hankyu Railway  do so, we can make  visiters satisfied and improve company's image.
 This is my opinion about  making our city more appealing.


4 comments:

  1. I thought that Takarazuka Station was clean. Many people hope their home town become clean, so please make effort to do so.

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  2. I understood Hankyu Takarazuka Sutation is not clean and the roof leaks. I often think that Hankyu Railway should clean and maintain the roof too.

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  3. You should keep manners and not throw things to stay clean the station!

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  4. Takarazuka city is a famous city. To clean hometown is very good.

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